I will be graduating in 2012

Mr.Romero, this is my essay on why I will be graduating in 2012. I would like to be graded on my voice and conclusion.

Have you ever impatiently waited for something? I’ve waited years to finally get into high school, now that I’m here, I will be graduating in 2012. Having a proficient education, a future career ahead of me, and my supportive family is what will help me succeed.

Education is very important. In every grade and class, I will learn as much as I possibly can. Hard work will impact the outcome of my grades. Knowing that college’s look at my progress, I will stay focused on my education.

In addition to education, my future career also motivates me to graduate. Most well paid jobs require an impressive resume, which includes a high school diploma and a college degree. I want to achieve a lot in my lifetime so whatever I decide to will take a lot of determination starting now.

The final thing that is going to help me graduate is the support of my family. They make sure I stay in school to better myself. If I need advice I can always go to a member in my family and talk about anything. Being that college is expensive, I don’t want to put my family in a position to pay the cost. I’m going to receive a scholarship so my family won’t have to worry about money.

Graduating high school is a major step in life and after you’ve passed that, you have your future ahead of you. I will do everything in my power to have the life I dream of and make the people around me proud. There is no limit to what I can do but finishing high school is where I begin!